Words that expand vocabulary:
sluice
banish : The women were banished to the other side of the world.
clustered : ‘I creep up to the deck where women are clustered, stitching.’
brig : The main character wishes they would keep “big Martha” in the brig until they reach shore.
shroud
douse : She douses herself in sea water
sluice : She sluices the stench from her clothes with seawater
Phonetic words:
- quilt (q and u stick like glue) qu-i-l-t
- escorted (es-cort-ed)
- laundry (uses the phonogram ‘au’)
- howls (uses the phonogram ow)
Use of simile : ‘The women are squabbling like seagulls.’
‘I feel good until I see her stitches, neat and tidy like a baby’s eyelashes. Mine look like someone has thrown kindling wood, all higgledy-piggledy. And the cloth puckers like Big Martha’s mouth.’
Use of metaphor : ‘The past is a misted memory.’